The day she packed her bags to leave
His lungs decided not to breathe
His head burst with the slamming of the door
His don't go pleas no longer heard
Her heart set free from being interred
His whisky glass soaks up another pour
She cast out from her tortured mind
The mess betrayal left behind
Her lover's arms bring comfort from the cold
Hope overrides the guilt and sleaze
Her fingers slowly trace and tease
The landscape she'll be digging up for gold
He leaves another dingy club
Still reeling from a stripper's snub
The dimly lit back street so damp so dark
A fight earns him a fractured skull
The blades of love begin the cull
The wounds when stitched display an ugly mark
She knew she had to take this chance
The needle asks his vein to dance
One last waltz on an artificial floor
Release from life had come so quick
Her lover learns her latest trick
A move that has him shaking to the floor
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Remarkable work !!
You are very kind Neilton
I truly appreciate it
Many thanks
An excellent narrative here peto. A much enjoyed story poem. Action packed and descriptive. Have a good day.
Thank you cassie
So glad to hear you enjoyed
Extremely grateful
Have a belter
Great work, Peto!
Water of Life
Smash the strife
Cheers mutley
Appreciate your time
And encouraging comment
Many thanks
That’s a grim ride, peto. The dark confection you have baked for us to consume, seasoned with illicit chemicals got me in.
Good to hear Dave
Great to see you here
Truly appreciate the kind words
Sounds like murder.
Prove it
Thank you very much
Fortunately I don't have to!
This is such remarkable work Stevie, shame I missed it!! Your poetic mind wove an interesting tapestry of desire, betrayal and woe. Awesome rhymes! You are fantastic!
So kind Christina
Many thanks as always
And of course, your insight is spot on
Extremely grateful
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