Briers and thorns

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How precise is the word of the Lord 

 

His description perfect 

 

The prophesy sure

 

A blatant Deception 

 

The prophesy stalled 

 

The whole land 

 

Full of briers and thorns 

 

Dig with the maddock 

 

Dwell on the hill

 

Where butter and honey 

 

Shall be your fill. 

 

One tenth are like the teal tree 

 

From their seeds

 

The sprouts will see

 

When His glory 

 

Fills the earth 

 

When righteous judgement 

 

Give new birth 

 

No more death 

 

Enjoy the wineing 

 

Yes my friends 

 

He isn't lying. 

  • Author: Valiantstar (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 17th, 2024 09:36
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • orchidee

    Good write 2.

    • 2781

      Thank who?

      • orchidee

        Am I 'Me, myself, or I' today? Thank one or all three of us! lol.

        • 2781

          I need to edit but I can't

        • Thomas W Case

          Excellent. Truth.

        • sorenbarrett

          Some see briars and thorns other see butter and honey it depends on who you are and how you see it. Good write Valianstar

        • Thad Wilk

          Awesome penning!
          Very evocative and
          thought provoking. 🤔
          Great rhyme, flow
          and blend, much enjoyed. 👍
          Best regards. ✌️. Thad

          • 2781

            Cheers



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