As the day
closes, and the
night slides in.
The big fish hunt
in shallow water.
The old dog
leaves home to
die alone.
Orphans cry for
love
and the arrogant
choke on
rotten meat.
The libraries
become hostels
and owls
break the backs
of tom-cats on
the prowl.
The booze is gone
and the cigarettes too.
And somewhere
in this silly
world, a father kisses
his daughter good night.
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Author:
Thomas W Case (Pseudonym) (
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Comments12
Your final stanza reminds us readers what truly counts in our day to day living. Beautiful and meaningful sentiment Thomas.
Thank you, I appreciate you.
a silly world it is sometimes.
but and ending that suggests all is not yet lost.
good one Thomas.
Thank you, my friend.
Dark and powerful words that carry an ominous tone. Unsure if it is a warning or statement of what is. It gives shivers.
Thank you.
if this don't knock the stuffing out of them, then nothing likely will ..
Thanks, brother.
Dear Thomas as exquisite as ever, my favourite stanza is the second your imagery throughout is just beautiful. Last lines ah, seems such a simple task complete, with a kiss from a dad, as we all know it isn't for all. Wow your compassion is blinding in this. 🌹
Thank you, sweet Teddy.
Howdy my friend!!
Wow, love this poem
really pulls on the
heartstrings!! 🎻
Wonderfully vivid
imagery, a superb read
beginning to end!!
Best regards, peace ✌️ Thad
Thank you. Much appreciated.
Dystopia with just a glimmer of light.
A rich write, Thomas.
Thank you, Dave.
I could say love covers a multitude of sins, but I sense it's deeper than that.
Thanks for reading and commenting.
Good write. Erm, good night Tom. lol.
Love this, Thomas. The tone reminds me a bit of Kerouac reading the last lines of On The Road. Really enjoyed, mate.
Some things are universal.
Great write
Amazing poem !! The last stanza shows that there is still hope for this world! Once again I'm glad I stopped by! Your video is also truly entertaining!
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