Her last words

NDOU ROLIVHUWA


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"I'm tired of sitting, just lay me down"

She whispered soft, with a gentle crown

Her eyes closed slow, like a fading light

As she surrendered to the endless night

 

With weary breath, she let go the pain

And embraced the peace that came like rain

Her heart, a vessel, worn and true

Finally at rest, with nothing to pursue

 

In those final words, a story's told

Of a life lived full, with moments to hold

A legacy left, in love and in grace

A memory to cherish, a peaceful place

 

May her last words be our guiding light

To face our own end, with courage in sight

And when our time comes, may we too find peace

In the stillness, where love and

memories release.

 

  • Author: Ndou Rolivhuwa (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 24th, 2024 12:16
  • Comment from author about the poem: As I reflect on my grandma's final words, I'm reminded of the love and wisdom she shared with me. Her legacy continues to inspire and guide me, and her memory remains a blessing in my life. I'm grateful for the time we had together and hold her love and wisdom close to my heart. May her memory continue to be a source of strength and comfort for me, and may I make her proud as I navigate my own path forward
  • Category: Spiritual
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  • Kayla Jackson

    Beautiful! made me think of my grandma

    • NDOU ROLIVHUWA

      Aww, thank you so much, Kyla Jackson! I'm glad that the poem resonated with you and brought back fond memories of your grandma. It's always special when art can connect us to our loved ones and cherished moments. May the poem continue to inspire you and honor your grandma's memory in a beautiful way!

      • Kayla Jackson

        🀍

        • NDOU ROLIVHUWA

          ☺️❀️

        • Neilton

          It certainly takes courage to talk about such a vulnerable moment ! Impressive work!

          • NDOU ROLIVHUWA

            Thank you so much for your kind words! Yes, vulnerability can be challenging, but it's often where the most meaningful connections are made. I'm grateful for your understanding and appreciation

            • Neilton

              You are absolutely right!!

              • NDOU ROLIVHUWA

                Thank you for your understanding.

                • Neilton

                  You are welcome πŸ’–

                  • NDOU ROLIVHUWA

                    🀍



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