Life showed you what it had in store
He left you crying at the door
With not much more than what you wore
He's not big on goodbyes
The one he always called the wife
Found something missing in her life
A thrush before she twists the knife
Inside it all just dies
Stars twinkle nightly as they must
When falling from the sky one burst
The sprinkling of it's stellar dust
Rejuvenates dead eyes
The love you always knew was there
Lit brighter than a signal flare
That guy who tried to show he'd care
Was in for a surprise
One message had been all it took
Emotions stirring feelings shook
No longer living like a spook
Alert to natural highs
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Author:
peto (
Offline) - Published: June 26th, 2024 06:07
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Comments2
Impressive work here! The way your words rhyme and the message you convey is pure talent! I also love the rhyme between the stanzas "He's not big on goodbyes"
"Inside it all just dies" ...
You are too kind Neilton
Your enthusiasm and encouragement are inspiring
Truly grateful
This really hits a high note....the work is just spot on with peoples everyday lives...the betrayal and so forth. The poem really hits home, what spectacular work!!
You trying to make me blush
Thanks Christina
Invaluable support since day1
Extremely grateful
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