Do you think I'm stuck in my pain ?
Do you believe I'll stay sick till the end of the maze?
Does the maze ever end?
Or will I run in circles till I can no longer catch my breath?
I didn't choose my sorrow
It came and it still follows
The moment it loses my track
I triumph in the streets of luck
But then I reach a dead end
Leaving me paralyzed and recked
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Author:
Neilton (
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- Category: Reflection
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My poems will always end. I could add 'THE END' after the last lines, to make it obvious! lol.
i don't know about paths of 'luck' though.
Ahah ! Maybe you should look for path of luck . They are a great getaway...
Oh, I dunno about luck. I don't believe in it! lol.
Hmm good to know!
You speak of being stuck in pain
An endless maze and sorrow
Yet it is hard to imagine the writer is suffering
Hoping you find the streets of luck more often
Talented
Most of the time thats how feel ! Stuck , like there is no way out of your problems, no escape .But I'm way too optimistic to give up so the only thing I can do is try again and again!thank you for your kindness! I truly appreciate you stopping by to read my poem !!!
Every time the body feels tension
Work on relaxation
Every morning when you wake up
Do some Pranayama
Every time a thought feels
Not aligned with your high ideal
Return gently to this ideal
So that those thoughts
Cannot steal
The sun's rays
Patience, persistence
And faith
You are absolutely right! I'll do my best ! Thank you for taking the time to write all that! Means a lot
You're welcome!
The pain is palpable. Great work.
Thank you so much!!
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