She pulls away when
I kiss
her.
And she treats me
like a stray dog.
I fell asleep, and
she retired to the
box springs alone.
I suck at goodbyes.
It's only a couple of days,
I know.
It still sucks.
She's going to Missouri
to get some things from
her Moms'.
She's a fucking nut.
A break will
do us good,
but I'll still
miss her.
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Author:
Thomas W Case (Pseudonym) (
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Comments4
Ah, the ghost of Bukowski Is all over this page, love the imagery, and what normal woman isn't a nut? lol fabulous dear Thomas. 🌹
You are right. Lol. You are the best woman in the world. And I bet, not too nuts. lol
Exactly lol 🤣🤣 I'm normal nuts
Gorgeous description of an emotionally distant woman....
Thank you, Alan. I appreciate it.
A cracking poem, mate. Really enjoyed the reading too.
Thank you, my friend.
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