As the wild summer breeze took hold
and I sat beneath my favorite baobab
looking up, to see all
the magnificence of this
seemingly upside down tree
I suddenly saw my own mind
fluttering above my head
I could hear the birds
having a bath in the sweetness
of their own glorious voices
splashing their musical notes
upon my thoughts
reaching up to catch
my very expensive tool of reflection
as it swayed from side to side
almost dancing to the sweet, sweet melody
of those beautiful birds
it flew higher and higher into the sky
as if it knew, I was trying to grab it?
and then I watched it gently float away
like a lost air balloon
floating higher and higher
until it had vanished
away from the now
and into tomorrow
into the new beautiful imagery
awaiting, my minds next
extraordinary vision.
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Author:
Teddy.15 (
Offline) - Published: June 28th, 2024 02:24
- Category: Reflection
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Comments4
A beautiful vision Teddy. Your tomorrows await your presence. 🌹
And yours too my dear A.P thank you always. 🌹
🫂
"I could hear the birds
having a bath in the sweetness
of their own glorious voices
splashing their musical notes
upon my thoughts"
Such a beautiful image!
Reflection does indeed sway from side to side and very shortly drifts away
"away from the now
and into tomorrow"
The placement of this in this location of the poem was masterful. This poem left a light airy feeling.
Thank you so much dearest sorrenbarret. Such an amazing thing to say, thank you. 🌹
Beautiful imagery. You painted a sublime picture with words here.
Thank you so much dearest Thomas. 🌹
Another feast in poetry. You transported me Teddy. My senses were stirred. Loved the imagery and the bird song was divine. You have a beautiful mind. 🌹
Wow, thank you so much dearest Cassie, such a wonderful kind thing to say to me. 🌹
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