Drunken lullabies sing their song
sleepy drink's eraser
In dreams of vomit nothing's wrong
No spirit could be baser
Liquid courage and fire
a bottle that has booze and hooch
naked dark curves to admire
with a transparent glass cooch
Top hard and long
it resembles a pecker
getting back to liquid song
male or female home a wrecker
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Author:
sorenbarrett (
Offline) - Published: July 2nd, 2024 07:12
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great work !!!
Thanks so much for the read and comment it is most appreciated.
Good write SB.
Thanks so much Orchi.
With a very seriously powerful end, alcoholism can wreck lives for sure. So very poetic, unfortunately one can only be helped if they agree to help themselves. 🌹
Hey Teddy I was a little hesitant with this one since the language was strong but the message yelled out to put it in. Yes it is so true one can only be helped when one wants to be.
As a recovering alkie I applaud this message
When the singing stops the problems are only too evident
Thank you so much for your read and comment it is valued
Could become an anthem for AA, Soren.
The above within your poem highlighting 'home a wrecker' and the correct point in comments re self motivation cover all I wanted to contribute.
Poem shot straight and true.
Thank you Dave for the read and comment. Yes for many it is a home and life wrecker. Your comments are always most appreciated.
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