Said The Old Woman To Me

Hans__

My hands are wrinkled

The skin around my eyes?

Pocket into each other

My walk now limp

 

Hair?

Greyer than a silver lining cloud

Teeth now false and man made

Hearing? 

That too is gone

That too is gone

 

But so long as my heart stays beating

And my smile stays beaming

And my children stay reaching

 

I’ll keep on loving

They’ll keep on loving

And I’ll keep on preaching

That getting old in itself?

Is a gift

 

  • Author: Hans (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 2nd, 2024 10:34
  • Comment from author about the poem: From my book: Womanhood And Her Shapes I wrote this piece for older women, everywhere who fear aging.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 19
Get a free collection of Classic Poetry ↓

Receive the ebook in seconds 50 poems from 50 different authors


Comments +

Comments2

  • peto

    Excellent writing
    Thoroughly enjoyed the message
    Particularly the Last line
    Compared to the alternative
    It is indeed a gift
    Looking forward to reading more

  • Thad Wilk

    A really
    great poem
    eloquently
    penned indeed! 👍
    Love where
    you went
    with this,
    a treat to read!
    Best regards ✌️ Thad



To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.