The devil & an angel once fell in love
but the angels were so mad
they threw her from heaven above
& to hell she went
to feel his warmth...
though the touch of him
burned her skin
he was the creature
who could lead her to any sin
for he was the only heaven below
she would ever know...
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Author:
Poetess. (
Offline) - Published: July 3rd, 2024 18:55
- Category: Gothic
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Comments1
Poetess,
Your poem has a beautiful, tragic quality, evoking themes of forbidden love, sacrifice, & the blurring of good & evil.
Your poem shines with a strong emotional core & an engaging narrative. I look forward to reading more from your mind & pen,
Ma5on
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