Demon In The Bottle (Part.3)


Think that I've final beat it,
Hoping the darkness retreated.
Part.3 of demon in a bottle,
No longer drinking full throttle.
Slowed all the way down and taking sips,
Since last December had no blips.
Enjoying just a few and then through,
A stark comparison from part 2,
Not wanting another drinking issue.

  • Author: Shaunmatthewcpoetry (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 8th, 2024 01:20
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  • orchidee

    It can cause us to do terrible things, or act strangely, even though we might say 'No change there then from when we are sober' Doh! (not really!).
    But it is embarrassing, seeing drunk people - for them, and for us seeing them.

    • Shaunmatthewcpoetry

      Oh yeah for sure, I haven't got blackout drunk since before last Christmas now, it says in the Bible we should stay sober minded, there are too many idiots around now and I'm paranoid I'll get too drunk one night and not make my way home so can't do it anymore.

      • orchidee

        Best way I think - though I'm 99% teetotal myself. it's Horlicks for me bedtime drink (bleuurghh. lol).
        We may think 'Arrgh, not another idiot' if we see [fill in own answer of any so-called comedian].
        As in 'Since when was [name] funny?'

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