Cold rain

sorenbarrett

Comes a winter storm

dark skies a cold wind

Night coming on

sleep in dreams sinned

 

Cold rain outside my door it falls inside my heart

It's frigid outside and in

The damp chills me to the marrow

warmth of fire so long it's been

  • Author: sorenbarrett (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 12th, 2024 06:08
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • 2781

    Did you see the weather report, down here.

    • sorenbarrett

      Thanks for the read yea it's been raining here for almost three weeks now and no break in sight. Appreciate the visit.

    • Teddy.15

      Beautiful, your emotion and imagery just beautiful. 🌹

      • sorenbarrett

        Thank you so much Teddy your words are always so welcome and appreciated.

      • orchidee

        Ooh not yet, thanks. We're in Summer in the UK. lol.

        • sorenbarrett

          Maybe not today but you can be sure as the weather someday .lol Thanks for the read Orchi send KP my regards.

          • orchidee

            Summer sun melts her botox. lol.

          • Cassie58

            Beautifully conveyed. Touches the emotions and tells a story about relationships in stormy weather.

            • sorenbarrett

              Thank you so much Cassie I appreciate your read and interpretation of this piece. Your words are most valued.

            • Thomas W Case

              Great use of the senses. I felt this.

              • sorenbarrett

                Thanks so much Thomas I appreciate the visit and read and your words are deeply valued.



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