What Women Want
I have yet to meet a woman
who is not afraid
of what I may, or may not
write about them ..
But still, they do each want
the self-same things ..
In effect, to have and then
to own their
very own poems ..
And then, for each poem to
reference their beauty
and extol virtues that I may,
or may not
even be entirely aware of ..
It therefore,
seems to me that most of
the women
I have met to date have a
preference for
liars and above every single
thing else,
extraordinarily deviant poetry ..
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Neville (
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Sounds like fishing in murky waters..
I'm no longer into fishing .. but I am still very much interested in what folk think about the content, quality and other aspects of what I post here. Thanks.
Wow! If word gets out about this poem, you may become a lonely man. Regardless of the truth you speak. My take is that deviant poetry is rather common. Most poets leap across boundaries with relish. ( Add a little mustard and you've got a wiener ) Deviant comment.
As regards your poem, it speaks a truth and Wows with the last line. Enjoyed. - Phil A.
Your take on me and my scribble and all likely possibilities is fine by me & much appreciated Phil .. a little flack is to be expected every now and again .. I do appreciate your honesty my friend .. Neville
Ya know N, I've been contemplating this my whole life. I've come to the conclusion there's no single answer. You just have to ask them, "What do you want?" 🤔
Maybe that\'s because you sir are a gentleman .. nuff said .. Neville
A gentleman who'd rather hear them say what they want, than presume that I know what they want. 😉👍
I dunno what they want. And I'm unlikely to find out, being married to KP. lol.
Such a shame and on so many counts ..
Much poetry here Irrespective of gender is, in my not very humble opinion, deviant inasmuch as it avoids reality in all manner of ways. What after all is a metaphor other than an attempt to avoid, or make pretty, stark reality?
So take that, Sir!!!!!!!!!
I'm quite sure I agree with you and appreciate the visit Dave .. Cheers .. Neville
Fantastic. Hysterical work.
Cheers
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