What Women Want

Neville


Notice of absence from Neville
If I get the thumbs up tomorrow from my Doc, I hope to be in Miami on Friday for three days before jumping ship and spending three weeks sailing around South America .. Sheesh, what we do to try n get a touch of inspiration eh' .. Take care while I'm away & please forgive any delay in my going quiet for a while .. Hope to return feeling better than I do write at this moment .. AGT's Neville 😎👍

What Women Want

 

I have yet to meet a woman

who is not afraid

of what I may, or may not

write about them ..

But still, they do each want

the self-same things ..

In effect, to have and then

to own their

very own poems ..

And then, for each poem to

reference their beauty

and extol virtues that I may,

or may not

even be entirely aware of ..

It therefore,

seems to me that most of

the women

I have met to date have a

preference for

liars and above every single

thing else,

extraordinarily deviant poetry ..

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 12th, 2024 07:29
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  • 2781

    Sounds like fishing in murky waters..

    • Neville



      I'm no longer into fishing .. but I am still very much interested in what folk think about the content, quality and other aspects of what I post here. Thanks.

    • MendedFences27

      Wow! If word gets out about this poem, you may become a lonely man. Regardless of the truth you speak. My take is that deviant poetry is rather common. Most poets leap across boundaries with relish. ( Add a little mustard and you've got a wiener ) Deviant comment.
      As regards your poem, it speaks a truth and Wows with the last line. Enjoyed. - Phil A.

      • Neville



        Your take on me and my scribble and all likely possibilities is fine by me & much appreciated Phil .. a little flack is to be expected every now and again .. I do appreciate your honesty my friend .. Neville

      • orchidee

        I dunno what they want. And I'm unlikely to find out, being married to KP. lol.

        • Neville



          Such a shame and on so many counts ..

        • Doggerel Dave

          Much poetry here Irrespective of gender is, in my not very humble opinion, deviant inasmuch as it avoids reality in all manner of ways. What after all is a metaphor other than an attempt to avoid, or make pretty, stark reality?
          So take that, Sir!!!!!!!!!

          • Neville



            I'm quite sure I agree with you and appreciate the visit Dave .. Cheers .. Neville

          • Thomas W Case

            Fantastic. Hysterical work.

            • Neville



              Cheers



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