ENTIRE COSMOS

Qurrat Al Ain


Notice of absence from Qurrat Al Ain
I'm taking a break for a while, for no specific reason. Maybe because, I don't get as much inspirations as I used to.

He could grow flowers in her roots,

She could give everything for him,

He could star her night sky,

She could color his cloudy life,

He could answer every query of her heart,

She could have united,

His beating heart with hers,

They both could have balm-ed,

Each other's wounds.

 

But the entire cosmos conspired,

Against his and her union.

 

But they were the most suitable pieces together.

  • Author: Qurra Ain (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 12th, 2024 09:30
  • Comment from author about the poem: We can't force fate, can we? Real life tragedy, more painful and feels more devastating.
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 12
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  • 2781

    But then again, can we?

    • Qurrat Al Ain

      I don't think we can. Because then, it will be a war for our own destruction. Nothing comes out of it. Just accept as it is, that's all.

      • 2781

        True, but when talking good and evil, evil destroys itself.
        Just a different angle, but I agree with you.

        • Qurrat Al Ain

          I understand. Thank you for sharing!

          • Doggerel Dave

            Let's not blame the Cosmos , which would be unaware, and owes them nothing. Aware - yes. Accept, I agree.

            • Qurrat Al Ain

              By cosmos, I mean the people and the circumstances that prove to be a barrier.
              Thank you for stopping by!

              • Doggerel Dave

                Sad when on a poetry site you are forced to define your terms when poets take liberties with truth and reality all the time.
                I'd have preferred ''humanity'', but there you go - here perhaps it is all a matter of personal taste.......

                • Qurrat Al Ain

                  I understand that a poem can be read and understood in several ways. Even if the terms are defined, we need not abide by them. Everyone may have their own style of interpretation. I respect and am ready to know them. Like you said, it's all about personal taste.

                  • Doggerel Dave

                    Right then. Take care.🙂



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