stabbed

Buttercup

Stabbed me for the fourth time
oh such pain, harder
than ever.
Betrayal of trust,
oh such lust.
Wood no more
only confusion till shore.

  • Author: Buttercup (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 13th, 2024 07:06
  • Comment from author about the poem: wood is the nickname of a person
  • Category: Love
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  • Maplespal

    till the shore shows,
    a tear randomly flows.
    broken trusted ideals,
    remembering how lust feels
    the pain will subside,
    despite the stabbing,
    your heart survived

    Many more stabs to the heart will come, strengthen yourself with each one.

  • Buttercup

    You don't even know me,
    but still tried to console me.

    We need more people like you,
    to change the world to new.

    It brought a smile on my face
    I know this is just a phase.

    Yes my heart survived,
    but it can't forget the way he lied.


    Thank you so much maplespal. It's a wonderful poem and I'm grateful.
    wishing you the best

    buttercup

  • Tony36

    Excellent write

    • Buttercup

      Thank you Tony

      • Tony36

        You're welcome

      • Cassie58

        Oh betrayal is the pits. Four stab wounds is far too many. Pain shared here in your brevity.

        • Buttercup

          Thank you very much Cassie



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