a moment has a beginning
and also an end
a moment becomes living
when into the next it blends
a memory is often revived
many moments inside
a memory is survived
after its moments have died
an ideas formation is past
the moment it has begun
an ideas existence lasts
until the need is done
a thought of forgotten time
and how moments descend
a thought of words that rhyme
and how this must end
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Author:
Maplespal (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: sorry, was bored and had to get this out of my head in order to move past the unusable lines to find the right words for a better poem. we all have these purges.
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Comments3
In determinism events are set just as with rhyme the choices are limited to complete the phrase. The illusion of choice is broken in rhyme if you want free will try free verse. Nicely done
If there was a standard, I would get nothing done.
I spent a moment - or three - or 100 moments - reading this good write.
If I could give them back I would.
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