In your eyes, a spark ignites,
A flame that burns so pure, so bright,
In your touch, my heart takes flight,
In your presence, all feels right.
Whispers soft in midnight's hue,
Every breath, a promise new,
With each heartbeat, I find you,
In the love we share, so true.
Hand in hand, we face the days,
In your smile,the sun's warm rays,
Through life's ever-twisting maze,
Our love's light forever stays.
No storm can dim this sacred fire,
No distance cool our hearts' desire,
Together, higher we aspire,
Bound by an eternal choir
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Author:
Dev parth (Pseudonym) (
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Comments6
Your title is the same name as that song by ‘ the bangles .. ‘
Good writing expressed nicely
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A continual rhyme falls like waves in this poem of romance, passion and proclaimed love. Nicely done
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End rhyme in all your stanzas in this love poem. Your lines have a beautiful flow and your title is so apt. Well penned Dev.
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As I read this poem aloud, I love the beautiful rhyming flow of each line, culminating in a perfect final stanza. Such love as this is an "Eternal Flame". Exquisite!
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Beautiful poem of love, Dev.
Thank you
I have a twin flame but he doesn’t talk to me anymore ..
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