rhytthm of the rain

jim56

listen to the the rhythm of the falling rain
with its pitter patter rolling down the pane
just like little teardrops falling from your eye
these are just same falling from the sky

when the sun comes out the tears all dry away
sadness of the teardrops becomes a happy day
makes you smile again not a tear in sight
just a lovely day happy and so bright

  • Author: jim56 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 18th, 2024 04:57
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  • sorenbarrett

    Always loved the rain but like tears enough is enough whether joy or sadness a change is always welcome/ Good write

    • jim56

      thank you for lovely comment

    • Cassie58

      Drawn in by your first line Jim. Remembered the song, listen to the rhythm of the falling rain. A lovely 60’s number. Rain drops remind me of tears, but we all need the rain fall to allow the crops to flourish. It is a beautiful day today. I hope you are smiling.

      • jim56

        hi Cassie The Cascades was singers 1963
        i love that song raindrops remind me of tears
        rolling on the glass little droplets
        i know my garden getting watered so its ok
        been cloudy and rain here today
        still warm tho thankyou for your always lovely comment
        and yes im smiling now i have a put a pic in my gallery its where i live
        taken from my bedroom take a look xxx

      • Dan Williams

        The world has a shortage of optimists, thanks for this effort.

        • jim56

          thanks for comment



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