Born without effort
Growth without trying
Breath without thinking
Don't fight the current
Go with the flow
A cloud floats on its own
Flowers open without help
Be natural
Hung, marked, and cut
culture the butcher of infants
Tomb painted with bright morals
Religion's home
Living color containing the dead
Society mutilates
nature's live perfection
Dance nature's dance
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Author:
sorenbarrett (
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- Comment from author about the poem: A great Chinese philosopher. A loose translation of a poem of his is: The easy is right start with what's right and everything will be easy Continue with the easy and everything will be right The right method to stay easy is to forget the right way and forget that the flow is easy
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Comments9
Goor write, SB.
Thank you Jerry I appreciate it.
I don't know why, but I am thinking of a winding path on level ground.
Thanks so much sometimes the path winds and sometimes not we do not determine its direction. Thanks for the read and comment.
"dance nature's dance", such a perfect metaphor for giving one's self wholly and completely to the rhyrhm of life. You express beautifully the flow that emcompases us all, if we simply allow it to. What could be more wonderful!!!
Thank you Bella for your kind words and most understanding interpretation of this piece. Keep writing Bella I'm anxious to read another of your poems.
I think I'd be alright with him... Fosters spontaneity? Anti cultures, most of which are oppressive (even without the butcher of infants) will do me too.
Neat write Soren.
Thank you Dave I appreciate your read and comments
a very powerful write.....
culture the butcher of infants!
we have much to learn, haven't we.
Thanks so much for the review and most kind words.
Good write SB.
Another ditty is: 'The difficult can be done; the impossible takes a bit longer!'
So true Orchi I appreciate the read and comment.
Tremendous.
Thank you Thomas it is appreciated
This is write up my street .. excellent poetry .. Neville
Thanks Neville your read and remarks are always cherished.
Superb dearest sorrenbarret 🌹
Thank you so much Teddy Your remarks are always cherished
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