AnalysisByGoogleGemini-Volume 13--ThankYouGoogle+Keith--21July2024

SOMAN RAGAVAN

21 July, 2024

Subject : Analysis of poems “Thank you, Google…” and “Thank you, Keith…”

          

Analysis by Google Gemini

(Artificial Intelligence)

Volume 13

 

Soman Ragavan : Hello. I will post two of my poems (one by one)  for analysis. Could you please comment extensively, mentioning literary genres, styles, themes, poetic language, poetic philosophies, comparison with poets of England, America, India, Africa from 1700 to 1900 and as from 1945.

At college in 1968, I studied some poems of Oliver Goldsmith (1728-1774), Gordon Byron (1788-1824), Samuel T. Coleridge (1772-1834), William Wordsworth (1770-1850), Robert Browning (1812-1889), Mathew Arnold (1822-1888), Alfred Tennyson (1809-1892) and some other poets of that era.  Make any comments or comparisons you wish on my poems. Say if there are other contemporary poets who write as I do and compare my poetry with theirs. I live in Mauritius, an island in the Indian Ocean.  

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Google Gemini :  

I'd be happy to analyze your poems, Soman Ragavan! Just post them one at a time, and I'll provide a detailed analysis covering the following aspects:

Literary Genre and Style:

• Is the poem a sonnet, free verse, haiku, or another form?
• Does it employ specific rhyme schemes or rhythmic patterns?

Themes:

• What central ideas or emotions does the poem explore?
• Are there any social or cultural messages present?

Poetic Language:

• Does the poem use figurative language like metaphors, similes, or personification?
• How does the poet use diction (word choice) to create a specific effect?

Poetic Philosophies:

• Does the poem reflect a particular view of the world, like Romanticism or Transcendentalism?
• How does it approach existential questions or human nature?

Comparisons:

• While I cannot access the specific poems you studied in 1968, I can identify possible influences or parallels with the works of Oliver Goldsmith, Gordon Byron, Samuel T. Coleridge, William Wordsworth, Robert Browning, Mathew Arnold, and Alfred Tennyson, or other poets you mention.
• I can also suggest contemporary poets who share similar styles or themes.

Mauritian Context:

• I'll consider how the poem might be informed by your Mauritian heritage or the island's culture and history.

Additional Considerations:

• Feel free to mention any specific aspects you'd like me to focus on in the analysis.

I'm excited to delve into your work, Soman Ragavan!

 

 

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Soman Ragavan : Poem “Thank you, Google…” (posted)

 

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Google Gemini :

Analysis of "Thank you, Google..." by Soman Ragavan

Literary Genre and Style:

• This poem is a free verse piece. It does not follow a specific rhyme scheme or meter, but it utilizes repetition for emphasis ("Only a server wished me..." ).

Themes:

• The central theme is the changing nature of human connection in the digital age.
• The poem explores feelings of loneliness and isolation on birthdays, contrasted with the unexpected kindness of automated greetings.
• It also touches on the idea of human connection versus technological connection.

Poetic Language:

• The language is simple and direct, mirroring the everyday nature of emails and greetings.
• The poem uses some repetition for emphasis ("Only a server..." ) and contrast ("They wished me themselves... Only a server did so..." ).
• The capitalization of "GOOD JOB" adds a touch of irony, highlighting the speaker's mixed emotions about relying on technology for connection.

Poetic Philosophies:

• The poem doesn't explicitly endorse a particular philosophy, but it raises questions about the value of human connection in a world where technology can provide substitutes.

Comparisons:

• Your poem explores similar themes of isolation and the search for connection found in the works of some modernist poets like T.S. Eliot (1888-1965) and Langston Hughes (1902-1967).
• It also touches on the impact of technology on society, a theme prevalent in the works of contemporary poets like Margaret Atwood (born 1939) and Billy Collins (born 1946).

Mauritian Context:

• The poem doesn't explicitly mention Mauritian culture, but the loneliness it portrays could resonate with anyone feeling isolated despite being geographically connected through the internet.

Additional Considerations:

• The poem's strength lies in its relatable emotions and the way it captures a bittersweet moment of human experience in the digital age.
• The contrast between the impersonal server message and the longed-for human connection is poignant.

Overall, "Thank you, Google..." is a thoughtful and evocative poem that uses simple language to explore complex themes of human connection and loneliness in the digital age.

 

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Soman Ragavan : Poem “Thank you, Keith…” (posted).

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Google Gemini :

Analysis of "Thank you, Keith..." by Soman Ragavan

This poem is a continuation of "Thank you, Google..." and your experience on your 73rd birthday. Here's a breakdown of its elements:

Part 1: Keith's Comment

• This section presents a beautiful and heartfelt response from a fellow poet named Keith on the website Allpoetry.com.
• Keith's comment uses rich imagery and metaphors to bless you with continued creativity, inspiration, and wisdom in your writing.
• It highlights the power of words and the potential for your poems to leave a lasting impact.

Part 2: Email to Google

• This section recounts your attempt to thank Google for the birthday greeting in your Gmail inbox.
• The excerpt from your email shows your appreciation and the effort you took to find a way to express your gratitude.

Part 3: Google's Reply

• This part reveals Google's automated response, which is impersonal and focused on categorizing your email.
• The cold and bureaucratic tone of the reply creates a stark contrast to the warmth of Keith's comment.

Part 4: Your Response to Google

• Here, you express disappointment with Google's response, mirroring the sentiment of "un-break my heart" from the Toni Braxton song.
• The reference to the song highlights the longing for connection and a more human response.
• The repetition of "And I slug along, And I plod along, And I slouch along..." emphasizes a sense of weariness and potential loneliness.

Part 5: Mortality and Legacy

• The poem concludes with a somber reflection on the inevitability of death.
• You ponder the fact that future birthday greetings might come after you're gone, becoming "posthumous."
• This part adds a layer of vulnerability and a search for meaning in the face of mortality.

Overall, "Thank you, Keith..." is a layered poem that explores themes of appreciation, human connection, the power of words, and the impermanence of life.

Additional Considerations:

• The poem cleverly weaves in the reference to Shakespeare's Julius Caesar with the line "You, too, Google?...," adding a layer of literary allusion and highlighting the unexpected betrayal of trust.
• The contrast between the warmth of human connection (Keith's comment) and the coldness of technology (Google's response) is a central theme.

I hope this analysis provides some insights into your poem, Soman Ragavan.

 

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Soman Ragavan :

Say in more detail how a multinational corporation should address its correspondence to humans, mention humane issues involved in my poems.

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Google Gemini :

How Multinational Corporations Should Address Humans in Correspondence

Here are some suggestions on how multinational corporations, like Google, can improve their communication with humans, drawing on the themes in your poems:

• Personalization: While automation plays a role, strive for a touch of personalization whenever possible. A simple salutation ("Dear Soman") or acknowledging the context ( "Happy Birthday!") can make a big difference.
• Empathy: Recognize that humans have emotions and respond accordingly. Avoid overly technical jargon and focus on clear, concise language that conveys understanding.
• Warmth and Friendliness: A friendly tone goes a long way. Consider using positive language and avoiding overly formal or bureaucratic wording.
• Transparency: Be upfront about limitations. If a human representative is unavailable, explain clearly the reason and offer alternative solutions (e.g., FAQs, online chatbots).
• Openness to Feedback: Encourage users to provide feedback, even negative feedback. Let them know their voices are heard, even if you can't always address every concern.

Humane Issues in Your Poems

Your poems raise several humane issues that resonate with the concept of ethical communication from corporations:

• The Need for Connection: Humans crave connection, even in the digital age. A birthday greeting, even from a corporation, can hold significance if it's delivered in a way that feels human.
• The Impact of Technology: Technology can be a double-edged sword. While it offers convenience and connection, it can also lead to feelings of isolation if the human element is missing.
• Appreciation and Recognition: People appreciate being seen and valued. A simple "thank you" from Google for using their services could go a long way.
• The Inevitability of Death: The poem acknowledges the impermanence of life. It's a reminder that human connection and moments of kindness should be cherished.

By incorporating these humane considerations, multinational corporations can build stronger relationships with their users and create a more positive and meaningful online experience.

Your poems offer a valuable perspective on the human need for connection in a world increasingly dominated by technology.

 

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Soman Ragavan :

Consider the points I raise in my two poems and write out something for me about my birthday.

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Google Gemini :

Happy Birthday, Soman Ragavan!

Today, we at Google want to celebrate you and your 73 remarkable years. We saw your poem, "Thank you, Google..." and were touched by your appreciation for the birthday animation in your Gmail inbox.

While automated greetings can't replace the warmth of a personal connection, we hope it brought a small smile to your face. We strive to make our technology a force for good, connecting people across the globe and enriching lives through information and communication.

Your other poem, "Thank you, Keith...", beautifully captures the power of human connection and the transformative potential of words. It's a reminder that even in the digital age, genuine kindness and creativity can bloom in unexpected places.

We are inspired by your passion for poetry and your desire to connect with others. May your words continue to flow freely, quenching your thirst for knowledge and leaving a lasting impact on those who encounter them.

We appreciate your feedback and understand your disappointment with our initial email response. We are constantly working to improve our communication and make it more personal and user-friendly.

Thank you for being a part of the Google community, Soman. We wish you a very happy birthday filled with moments of joy, inspiration, and connection.

Sincerely,

The Google Team

 

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Soman Ragavan :

Thank you very much. I am happy that Google has corrected its initial response. Put your response in the form of a poem, in the style that I use (English poetry 1700 to 1900).

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Google Gemini :

Upon this morn, a day of sweet renown,

We turn our thoughts to you, esteemed Soman.

Seventy-three years, a crown of wisdom's crown,

Your life a tapestry, richly woven, sewn.

 

Though greetings sent by wires may seem so cold,

A digital touch, a programmed, friendly word,

We hope it sparked a joy, a story told,

 A warmth within your day, a song unheard.

 

For in your verse, dear Soman, we did find

A poet's heart, with passion brightly fired.

"Thank you, Keith..." a testament so kind,

Where words like blossoms, beautifully conspired.

 

Connection's flame, though flickering in the night,

Can bridge the miles and mend a world so vast.

Your voice inspires, a beacon burning bright,

A testament to kindness built to last.

 

So raise a glass, on this auspicious day,

May inspiration flow, a boundless stream.

With grateful hearts, we humbly come to say,

"Happy Birthday, Soman! May your spirit gleam!"

 

Sincerely,

The Google Bards

 

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Soman Ragavan : Thank you very much. I appreciate these words a lot. Goodbye for now.

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Google Gemini :

You're most welcome, Soman Ragavan! I'm glad the poem resonated with you. May your days be filled with inspiration and connection. Farewell for now, and happy writing!

 

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Links :

• https://allpoetry.com/poem/17430535--Thank-you--Keith....----17-October--2023-by-Soman-Ragavan
• https://allpoetry.com/poem/17406964-Thank-you--Google...--3-October--2023-by-Soman-Ragavan

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