Not typing this to impress,
In front of this computer, shirtless,
A strange guy with marvelous thoughts,
Determined to confess with pure words.
Confession isn’t always about love;
It’s where unspoken feelings reside.
Some might not find it intriguing enough
To decode the emotions inside.
How powerful it is, in someone’s words,
Making the heart either flatter or shatter.
Appearance or wealth fades, so it doesn’t matter;
These feelings ignite the unlit candle, often better.
My untamed soul ponders wherever I go.
Your touched atmosphere brings a smile; I’d glow.
Glaciers don’t melt like hearts do for someone;
They either break or heal—clueless, that’s life; it goes on.
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InHumanSketch (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: This means a lot to me, I'm not a professional writer nor i took any training or something. i recently started to write and it's how i felt midnight about how someone's words heals or breaks, i don't know what to say more. Please review me :) so i can write better.
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Comments3
A very raw poem. Your words paint vivid scenes. Keep writing and keep exploring the inner sanctum.
Thank you for your thoughtful feedback. I'm glad my poem resonated with you and that the imagery stood out. I will definitely keep writing and delving deeper into my thoughts and emotions. Your encouragement is truly appreciated!
This contains the essence of what I call poetry. If it evokes feeling it is art and this is a very good start. Keep it up.
Thank you so much for your kind words! I'm thrilled that my work resonated with you. Your encouragement means a lot to me, and I'll definitely keep striving to evoke feelings through my art. Thanks again!
Not trying to but still I am impressed.
Thank you Dan, 😊 it brought a smile on my face. I'll try to write more
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