One Side of Still

Dan Williams

All of the straight trees stood looking

as trees will

since before time ran so slowly

off to one side of still.

I guess I knew they would protect me

from the Sun’s questioning

and the river that had arrived there

by dead reckoning.

And the branches took my hands,

and the water thinned my fear;

there is a small sturdy safety

I find sitting here.

One, close by, was badly angled

with disregard for gravity,

yet was still willing to listen

to the silence from me.

  • Author: Dan Williams (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 28th, 2024 00:34
  • Comment from author about the poem: Summers spent in the further out Metroparks bring this out.
  • Category: Reflection
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  • Doggerel Dave

    An experienced moment. Perfect harmony.

  • Neville


    there are always at least two sides to every story .. can't wait to find a few more of em .. and your title is to bloomin die for and willingly .. Neville

  • sorenbarrett

    Simply beautiful. A simple adjustment and anthropomorphic picturing brought stillness to all. Brilliant!

  • MendedFences27

    Nicely done, I was there with you beside that river, enjoying the silence of Nature. - Phil A



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