trick me, confuse me, tell me what I am not
abuse me, amuse me, be the one I've always sought
question me, pressure me, tell me to look into your eyes
manipulate me, deceive me, tell me all your comforting lies
display for me, draw for me, the path to your heart
free me from, comfort me from, ideas we'll grow apart
teach to me, clear for me, a way into your twisted head
hide from me, keep from me, the hurtful words you said
assure me, promise me, you won't let me walk away
beg of me, plead with me, ask me to always stay
conjure for me, produce for me, a spell that makes you mine
tell the me, convince the me, it's all by fates design
a dream for me, a life for me, gone to the memory of you
nothing seems to, nothings meant to, be forever true
trick me into, deceive me into, forgetting your lovely face
stay with me, remain with me, in my dream filled space
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Comments1
The repetitive wording and rhyme in this poem gives it power to take the reader along on its currents. A wonderful ride.
I tried to get 3 separate poems in one.
not sure if it worked.
example line 1:
trick me, confuse me, tell me what I am not
trick me, tell me what I am not
confuse me, tell me what I am not.
and so on with other lines.
Worked fine
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