don't be scared of the future,
don't worry bout the past,
let your life flow smoother,
like a river and surpass.
overcome your fears,
fly and never cease to try,
for, soon, the sky
will be clear.
instead learn to accept,
and learn to embrace,
and think of all the dreams
you plan to chase.
seize the day,
and write all the
poetry you can not say.
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Your poem beautifully captures the essence of living in the present and embracing life's journey. The river metaphor flows seamlessly into a message of resilience and hope. I particularly appreciate how you've balanced acknowledging fears with the encouragement to overcome them. The final lines about expressing unspoken thoughts through poetry add a personal touch that resonates deeply. Your words serve as a gentle reminder to seize each day with optimism and creativity.
oh my god, thank you tristan!!
You are welcome! Great poem!
A great message that we all should take more to heart. Nicely worded in verse.
i know right? thanks
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