Still I Know
Still, I know
the warmth of her embraces
and her looks of many faces
the sweetness of her kiss
and the tranquility of her bliss
the tenderness in her arms
and the pleasures of her charms.
Still, I have seen
that shine in her eyes
and felt the hurt of her goodbyes.
Still, I know
that she will be here tomorrow
and that this will end all my sorrow.
- Author: MendedFences27 ( Offline)
- Published: July 29th, 2024 10:15
- Category: Love
- Views: 28
- Users favorite of this poem: Bella Shepard, Doggerel Dave
Comments5
Fixation on a love written nicely in verse well done
Thanks SB. I do believe I am Fixated on love poetry.
This poem must be read aloud for the wonderful rhyming pattern which enhances every line. It is beautiful, tender and brimming with love, what could be better. Loved it!
Thanks Bella. So glad that you read it aloud, sometimes I use that as a test for what I write.
this is a real treat Phil .. a meticulously crafted love poem with I imagine considerable longevity to keep it going round and round the MPS block .. 100/100 no less .. Neville
Thanks Neville. My poetry keeps me going around in circles. I'm guessing you've felt the same at times.
I can give ninety percent of love poetry a miss, Phil, but
Still, I both enjoyed the content,
And admired the structure and rhyme.
Beautiful.
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