Notice of absence from Tristan Robert Lange
Friends, I’m doing my best to keep up with comments. 😅 I’m still current on my own poems and first replies on others’ work, but this season has been a bit of a twister. Figured I’d drop a quick note so you don’t think I’ve vanished or gone flaky.
Read. Write. Rise. Realize. 🤘💀🖤
Friends, I’m doing my best to keep up with comments. 😅 I’m still current on my own poems and first replies on others’ work, but this season has been a bit of a twister. Figured I’d drop a quick note so you don’t think I’ve vanished or gone flaky.
Read. Write. Rise. Realize. 🤘💀🖤
Invalidated by validation,
The evaluator knows magic,
Their words spell-cast outward
In fractal daggers of poison.
In fractal daggers of poison.
Listeners do the talking,
While the voiceless listen
To them drone on and on
With insincere platitudes.
Who assesses the assessor?
Who can break the silence
That has been taught
To the children of slaves?
Rise up, fair eagle!
Rise up on the wind,
Wild and ready
For the coming storm.
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Author:
Tristan Robert Lange (
Online) - Published: July 30th, 2024 00:38
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Comments3
Excellent
Thank you! Your feedback means a lot to me.
Good write T.
Thank you so much!!!
A call to action this poem invokes paradoxical lines to emphasize why action is needed. A moving and powerful write.
Thank you for your insightful comment! I'm glad the poem resonated with you.
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