In the Clouds

MendedFences27

In the Clouds

 

Floating, not on water, but on clouds.

The joy is heart-lifting, profound.

There is no other sound

like the sound of clouds.

 

Lolling, not in a hammock, but in a cloud.

The peace is everlasting, serene.

There is no other scene

as peaceful as in a cloud.

 

Sleeping, not in a bed, but on a cloud.

The comfort is revitalizing, invigorating.

There is no other rest

like having slept on a cloud.

 

Walking, not on a pathway, but on a cloud.

The ease is stressless, undemanding.

There is no weightlessness

as that offered by the clouds.

 

Loving, not with her, but among the clouds.

The feelings are rich, enduring.

There is no other passion

like love among the clouds.

 

Best of all, there is no rain.

  • Author: MendedFences27 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 3rd, 2024 07:41
  • Comment from author about the poem: Relaxing to some music and this is what happened.
  • Category: Fantasy
  • Views: 30
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  • 2781

    Was it harp music?

  • Cassie58

    The Lark Ascending by Vaughan Williams does this to me. It is a wonderful out of world feeling. Very nicely penned. Music is a great escape. Happy Saturday.

    • MendedFences27

      Thank you, Cassie58. It is amazing how some music can affect one in this way. It's a wonderful feeling.

    • sorenbarrett

      Beautiful images in this write. Love the clouds and sometimes find myself living in the clouds. Nicely done

      • MendedFences27

        Thank you, SB. Soothed by music I was drifting among the clouds.

      • Caring dove

        Lovely writing I like the words used .. a good read ))

        • MendedFences27

          Thank you, Caring Dove. Love your pseudonym. Thanks for the comment.

        • Dan Williams

          Gives Joni Mitchell a run for the money. Nicely done.

          • MendedFences27

            Thank you, Dan. Joni's one of my favorites. By no means can I be mentioned in the same sentence as her, but Thanks again.

          • Goldfinch60

            Such wonderful words Phil, I have often wondered what it would be like loving amongst the clouds.

            Andy

            • MendedFences27

              Thank you, Andy. I think you will be pleased to know that I was listening to RIOPY. I was totally relaxed. So beautiful.

              • Goldfinch60

                So pleased about you listening to Riopy Phil, so relaxing.

                Andy

              • Neville



                There really is something kind of special about clouds isn't there .. and its good to know that I'm not the only one who finds inspiration from music and general observations .. I think many of my reviewing predecessors have stolen my thunder, but hey ho .. Neville

                • MendedFences27

                  Thank you, Neville. Sometimes if you get to a poem late there is nothing left to say. Just a brief comment is enough. Much appreciated.

                • Teddy.15

                  How very beautiful dear Phil. 🌹

                  • MendedFences27

                    Thank you, Teddy. Beauty is a second requirement for it to be poetry. Glad you found it thus.



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