The Forsaken Creation

Tristan Robert Lange


The day runs into the night,
The moon filled with fright
As it shines its silver light
Upon bats taking to flight.
Standing there on a hill,
A creature stands still
And alone in the dark
As it wanders a park.
Alive and alone to start,
Left with a beating heart
And many a broken limb,
The creature’s fate is grim.
In a fog blanket shroud,
The creature moans aloud,
Looking to the stars above,
Seeking solace, seeking love.
A modern Prometheus, unknown,
In the night it onward roams.
With no home, ever, to it open,
The monster is love unspoken.

  • Authors: Tristan Robert Lange
  • Visible: All lines
  • Finished: August 19th, 2024 01:00
  • Limit: 15 stanzas
  • Invited: Friends (users on his/her list of friends can participate)
  • Category: Gothic
  • Views: 9
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  • A.B. Jakobsen

    Hello Tristan. I apologise for never participating in the fusion poem. I have been stupidly busy with my studies and vacation and therefore never logged on to the site. I do apologise. From the poems I have read of yours I would have considered it a great pleasure to participate in a fusion poem with you. Please never hesitate to send me such requests in the future. I will be sure to keep an ear to the ground!! Quite the melancholic and vivid poem that it became however. I hope you enjoyed the process!

    • Tristan Robert Lange

      No worries and thank you for the comment! I will not hesitate to include you!

      • A.B. Jakobsen

        I appreciate your inclusion very much, thank you! I look forward to your next work.



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