Ambrosia for Us

Thoughtless



Long nights, punctuated by the stars.
Empty fields out the bedroom window stretch into the curve.
The stars, a comfort, as her memories fill me.
Rest in peace "my girl." 
Eventually the sun rises and will shine again.
Ambrosia for us.

  • Author: JDB (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 5th, 2024 08:50
  • Comment from author about the poem: At nights when I miss her beside me.
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 57
  • Users favorite of this poem: Teddy.15
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  • Tony36

    Love it

    • Thoughtless

      Delighted to see your comment. Thank you.

      • Tony36

        You're welcome

      • sorenbarrett

        Beautiful and (possibly?) metaphoric.

        • Thoughtless

          True and metaphoric. Thank you.

        • Teddy.15

          Almost made me cry,your deep sorrow, I felt every bit with a beautiful thought at the end. 🌹

          • Thoughtless

            I look forward seeing her again in the world to come. Thank you for your kind words.

          • Dan Williams

          • Dan Williams

            Short and sweet, nicely done.



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