Heavy.
Heavy. heart
Heavy. laboured breathing, gasping, panting, thin streams of air squeezing through her throat
Heavy for all her life with burdens, weighing her down.
Heavier and heavier.
She gasped softly.
Thick heavy blood spruced from her wrist, flowering and blooming onto the floor.
Her eyes. Heavy with resignition. shutting slowly.
Heavy. the heavy thud. the sound of the floor hitting her body as she fell.
Heavy.
Her heart beat a final, labored rhythm as she exhaled a light breath.
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Author:
xqw (
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- Comment from author about the poem: idk if this poem is good give me tips pls ive never written one before
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Comments2
Heavy is the tone of this poem. Well written and keeping the reader on the edge of his seat until the last line that leaves a heavy feeling in the heart. Loved the use of light in the ending breath.
Thank you so much!!!!
Great poem,
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