Notice of absence from Thepoetman1234
THE GOAT
THE GOAT
Fresh air lingering on in streets that was once freshly cut grass
The bridge was once the barrier between civilization and the paradise that was nature
but the capitalistic views of the corporate pigs turned trees in streets
Bushes into buses
Now you must understand that urbanization is good
it helps many people and businesses
but is misses the birds and the trees
for what at one point will become a commodity.
So I ask if it is worth it now
to continue the growth of concrete
for the destruction of nature
in the hope of corporate profits
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Author:
William Kennedy (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: This poem reflects on my views on Urbanization, Especially where I live in Swindon. I Feel afraid of losing the land to concrete and its time to make a poem on my poetic side to talk about it.
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Comments2
I see this as well but it begs the question, what is the cause. Some say greed but I say people. Too many people. An important message here
Don't go away. I gave you a hard time on the British Empire. I'll not resile from that. Here for me you have something much more relevant to say about urbanization. You have writing skills to be used carefully.
Look after yourself, take care.
Thank a lot. I am genuinely appreciative about the comments and understanding. Don't worry, nothing like 'the british empire' will happen again. I will stick to my nature and family members 🙂
You just take it easy - you have a lot to offer. Explore the big bad world out there and see what you make of it........
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