Lake or Ocean

ᛕꫀƺꫀ᥊᥊ꫀ


Notice of absence from ᛕꫀƺꫀ᥊᥊ꫀ
Maybe I'm dead? I dont know... Yet

Shiny like glass, or choppy waves?

Sharks and unknown, or ducks and fish?

Safe and refreshing, or scary and cold?

Salt or fresh?

Water sports, kaiaking, paddle boarding, fishing, or sailing?

Lake or Ocean,

which do you prefer?

  • Author: Z_Z (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 9th, 2024 16:11
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Users favorite of this poem: 𓆩Mase𓆪, sheta
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Comments7

  • 𓆩Mase𓆪

    Ocean

  • Maplespal

    a river

    • 𓆩Mase𓆪

      mmmhhmmmphh, does river count?

    • sorenbarrett

      Surfing on the ocean or water skiing on a lake not vice versa. Nice write.

    • sheta

      ah the aspects of water, i perfer the ocean in my dreams

    • sheta

      amazing write

    • Cassie58

      Visually I love them both, but emotionally I prefer the lakes because I can generally see their boundaries. With the ocean I can’t. That can be overwhelming at times. I enjoyed reading you.

    • NafisaSB

      the lake - silent, serene and placid -the ocean has too many changes of moods to cope up with at this age...



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