Notice of absence from Mackenz
Leave of absence message:
Absence
Leave of absence message:
Absence
Shiny like glass, or choppy waves?
Sharks and unknown, or ducks and fish?
Safe and refreshing, or scary and cold?
Salt or fresh?
Water sports, kaiaking, paddle boarding, fishing, or sailing?
Lake or Ocean,
which do you prefer?
-
Author:
Mackenz (
Offline) - Published: August 9th, 2024 16:11
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 72
- Users favorite of this poem: 𓆩Mase𓆪, rengoku
Offline)
Comments7
Ocean
a river
mmmhhmmmphh, does river count?
Surfing on the ocean or water skiing on a lake not vice versa. Nice write.
Thank you
ah the aspects of water, i perfer the ocean in my dreams
amazing write
Visually I love them both, but emotionally I prefer the lakes because I can generally see their boundaries. With the ocean I can’t. That can be overwhelming at times. I enjoyed reading you.
Same I like lakes better. Thank you!😊
the lake - silent, serene and placid -the ocean has too many changes of moods to cope up with at this age...
Yeah lol, thank you
To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.