Rapunzel really loved that guy.
But Jack he had a roaming eye.
She caught him cheating by and by.
Things went awry, things went awry.
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Betrayed she went on a war-dance.
Jack couldn't keep it in his pants.
That loser had his final chance.
To her askance, to her askance.
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Rapunzel she got awful mad.
She flipped her lid, then things got bad.
With frying pan she crowned that lad,
It made her glad, it made her glad.
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She thought he loved her but instead.
He lied to her she was mislead.
She let that dude screw up her head.
And now Jacks dead, and now Jacks dead.
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That day Rapunzel went berserk.
And got revenge upon that jerk.
She took pride in this piece of work.
See that big smirk, see that big smirk~
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- Author: Thad Wilk (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: August 10th, 2024 09:27
- Category: Fable
- Views: 14
Comments2
Another fun read. Love these fairy tales. Fairy tales are fun but distorted ones are better.
Howdy Soren! π π΅
Thank you my friend! π
I love writing my version
of them, sometimes I
feel like a nut! π₯ π€£
Best regards βοΈ Thad
I take it this was no open marriage, then Thad?
A pity the way it turned out; Jack could conceivably have had other qualitiesβ¦.
Howdy Dave π πΆ
Thanks for stopping by!
Well come to find out Jack
never cheated on her,
she imagined it, the chick
was bipolar and stopped
taking her meds..tough
break for Jack ! π
Best regards βοΈ Thad
Yeh - tough luck for Jack, tough luck for an underfunded overworked medical team charged with looking after her............thanks for bringing this serious issue to everyone's attention, Thad. π
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