barley field

jim56

  i wandered through the barley so beautiful and gold
so wonderful to touch so wonderful to hold.

underneath the sun growing oh so high
standing very upright reaching for the sky.

growing very free growing in the wild
looking very lovely so gentle meek and mild.

such a lovely site and growing oh so tall
the day i walked through barley is a day i will recall.

  • Author: jim56 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 11th, 2024 05:24
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  • sorenbarrett

    As I read this I remember Sting's "Fields of gold" a beautiful poem and beautiful song.

    • jim56

      got the idea of the song
      thanks for lovely comment xx

    • Tony36

      Great write

      • jim56

        thankyou for comment means a lot

        • Tony36

          You're welcome

          • jim56

            thanks

          • Caring dove

            Nice writing ))

            • jim56

              thankyou for comment
              means a lot

            • Cassie58

              Beautifully visual stanzas Jim. A field of barley in the sunshine, a sight to behold. Nothing like getting back to nature. Hope your weekend has been a good one. All the best.

              • jim56

                used to walk through barley fields as a kid
                in my younger days
                been reallly hot here today
                but really nice got a bit done
                in garden

                hi cassie thankyou for as always lovely comment
                and my smile hope you had a nice weekend xxx

                • Cassie58

                  I did thank you. It was hot here too. Spent time in the garden and watching the Olympics.

                  • jim56

                    i have tv outside in summerhouse i built a few years ago
                    had olympics on tv like watching olympics
                    when i got into trouble mum use to say your in for the high jump now lol xxx



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