sorry i've been gone for a while ( the girl i once loved)

Lei


Notice of absence from Lei
If I don't answer I'm most likely at school,with family (just got back from surgery so still kinda recovering)

she was as fragile as a flower

No that does not describe her

everyday

every word was a countdown

to the day she destroyed me 

no she was not as fragile as a flower

but as fragile as a bomb

  • Author: Lei (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 11th, 2024 19:04
  • Comment from author about the poem: this poem is basically me but i titled it the girl i once loved because i don't know i guess the narrator or speaker isn't me? i don't know how that works
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Mase ♪

    Good write Lei. Welcome back

  • sorenbarrett

    Fragile as a bomb. A most interesting line. They do shatter you know. Most unique. Loved it



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