Atonemental

Mutley Ravishes

If the country’s gates are opened 

I will have shown

That I have atoned

For ancestral sins

Wear a permanent grin

Or so I perceive 

Never question 

These beliefs 

Never ask “Who am I”? 

The limitless blue sky 

The burst pressure of a tire

Is about 200 psi

 

 

  • Author: Mutley Ravishes (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 11th, 2024 21:01
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  • sorenbarrett

    Enigmatic lines that lead one to reread and puzzle over this poem. Nicely rhymed and with good flow. I felt it without understanding.

    • Mutley Ravishes

      Thanks for your comment, Soren. I felt like I was treading through a minefield writing this rhyme!

    • Tom Dylan

      A very intriguing read. Really well done.

      • Mutley Ravishes

        Thanks, Tom. I guess I successfully negotiated the minefield!



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