Words & Silence
Once silence meant sadness, longing, and strife,
A foe of whispers and words, cloaking life,
Like a gloomy sky on doomsday’s dark flight,
A veil that obscured all warmth and light.
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Now it’s no longer a foe but a friend,
Expressed in a place where emotions blend,
In Eden’s garden, the bitter fades away,
Into a sensual silence where hearts sway.
Tongues speak in rhythms, hearts beat near,
Only the whispers of their breath and the soft sound of their kiss are all you hear
Hands explore softly, nothing to fear.
Bodies heat up like magma’s embrace,
On this bench, in a beautiful, tender, and quiet place.
These lines are lovingly dedicated to you refined lady.
By Young Fella
(Neither ever, nor never)
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Author:
MRF (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: August 13th, 2024 15:36
- Comment from author about the poem: The poem contrasts past and present views of silence. Previously, silence was seen as a sign of sadness and separation. Now, it’s a positive and comforting presence, especially in intimate moments where it helps deepen connections and create warmth.
- Category: Love
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Comments4
Lovely writing
Thanks for commenting on my work. Glad to see that you enjoyed it.
As times change so do expectations and feelings. Space seems more valued in crowded society. Nicely said
Thank you for your comment. Nice review as well.
Shockingly beautiful. It's hard to tell the sensuality with words. This lady is lucky !
Thank you for your comment; it’s truly motivating and encouraging.
You’re right, words can’t fully capture the depth of emotions, but if the lady reads my lines, she’ll understand and feel them deeply. I appreciate your review again.
The lady is fortunate, but the work exists thanks to her. Together, they complete each other.
Your words are like a brigde over silent waters.
Exactly! Your metaphor is awesome. It beautifully pictures the scene.
Thank you very much, Young Fella.
You're very welcome.
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