Light breeze, such a lovely evening
His hand in my hand, tracing patterns
The city has gone dark except for the light of the lanterns
and here I was looking into his eyes, star gazing
He asked me if I was lost and I told him
"Is it even possible, to be lost
in your emerald green eyes ?", he grinned
I could’ve melt at that moment, almost
The night envelops us in her tight embrace
We could admire the stars glow up in space
but in my opinion, I’d rather
stay lost in his beautiful eyes forever.
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Comments4
Romantic and sweet. Nicely written
Thowe two words are exactly what I wanted to describe in this poem.
A lovely romantic offering. Emerald green eyes, sound inviting. Nicely composed.
Thank you very much !
Lovely , sweet writing like your poem
Thanks !
Your title lured me in and then your words did the rest of the work! Brilliant write! Heartfelt! Everything good poetry is about!
Thank you for this very encouraging comment ! It was one of my very first poems, glad the writing was appreciated.
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