Notice of absence from NinjaGirl
Will be absent until Jan 6th. Happy holidays to all!
Will be absent until Jan 6th. Happy holidays to all!
misunderstood
to
miss understood
they mistook
my rage
for teenage
games
but really
I was just
hurting.
They thought
I was being
difficult.
I was
Just
In
Pain.
But
at least
Now
they
know.
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Author:
NinjaGirl (
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Comments4
A clever play on words. Nice
Thanks
Absolutely love the play on words here. When a poet does that, it's pure magic, and you pulled it off brilliantly! I also appreciate how the poem visually deconstructs as it progresses, mirroring the emotional unraveling you're expressing. Absolutely brilliant!
Thank you!
Great poem N. Has amazing flow!
Thanks!
I get the hint of being bullied. Am I correct or not?
Not quite, read some of my other poems and the truth becomes apparent!
Ok.
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