Notice of absence from rengoku
if I’m off I’m probably punching my bed in anger
if I’m off I’m probably punching my bed in anger
what goes up
must come down
yeah,my feet don't touch the ground
see the world spinning upside down
watch me run the night away
watch me save the day
feel my storm is getting close,
have it your way!
set aside our troubled phase,
like a laser beam,
my eyes on you!
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Author:
Gyiuu does cry (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: August 15th, 2024 00:46
- Comment from author about the poem: hey can every one give this a like? im try ing to get as many likes as i can
- Category: Short story
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Comments4
put your feet on the ground and i will like it.
nice little write.
lol i will try but flying is sooo fun!
Don't worry keep flying. I like it for you.
I feel the stare. Got your eye on me what are you watching for? Fun read
thank you its supposed to be fun!
Yeh - You once gave me a like (along with many others if I read the user activity list correctly)
What, and especially why?
So little girl, go back to playing video games and return when you can provide content.
Then, If I'm still around (which I doubt) I will engage if I feel your write is worthwhile.
Alright: Before you get the chance to respond (if you ever do) I would just like to add that I came to the above via your fave which I couldn't understand, plus your notice of absence. I've subsequently read some of your stuff and feel I might have been just a little hasty in my initial call. Not going to delete it which would have been easier, but......
ty and your poems are great too i love them!
just so u know im not ignoring your other kind words said to me
and im not a little girl
mason knows i play with dolls but every one has a childhood hobby ok?
If 'ty' means 'thank you' there obviously was no need. If it doesn't, please let me know.
If there's anything further in my second email which you feel offends you, Then again let me know.
Take care of yourself.
yes it does mean thank you
and thanks again
Alright - now that the smoke has cleared and all is quiet (you have some really supportive friends, Zelda) I just want to make it absolutely clear that I was wrong in my initial post and for that I apologise unreservedly. I was in a bad space that day, but that was no excuse.
Take care of yourself.
thank you doggrel dave
i see that you,like me have much pride in us,so its hard to humble ourselves
have a good day
But not impossible. If I have to I will. And I did need to there.Take care.
Amazing write, Zelda, it's super catchy! Don't listen to this jealous hater Dave. 🙂 I Liked the poem
lol ty m
ty all so much guys
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