Dummy

Thoughtless

dummy
running circles,
vertigo, and perplexed,
mind wrestling between two lovers.
dummy.

  • Author: JDB (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 15th, 2024 06:56
  • Comment from author about the poem: What fools these mortals be.
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 29
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  • Teddy.15

    Fools indeed. Honesty is always the best road in my very humble opinion 🌹

    • Thoughtless

      So right you are. Even when it's late in a relationship.

    • Tony36

      Great write

    • sorenbarrett

      All those words apply. Cleverly written and nicely said.

      • Thoughtless

        Thank you. I used a form of poetry created by Adelaide Crapsey, the cinquain. At least, I think I did.

      • Cassie58

        Oh what complicated lives some people lead. Not for the faint hearted. Two is company, threes a crowd. Yes, foolish behavior Thoughtless.

        • Thoughtless

          So, it is. I always enjoy your insight. Thank you.



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