A gentle presence

Mackenz

In green pastures, and sunlight’s glow,


A horse stands still, calm and slow.


His mane flows free, his steps are light,

 

A gentle presence day and night.

 

In the world He grew,

 

He roams the land, both wild and true

  • Author: Mackenz (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 16th, 2024 18:57
  • Category: Short story
  • Views: 46
  • Users favorite of this poem: senjuro, rhmn_7
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  • sorenbarrett

    Macenz a beautiful picture you paint in poetic words. Peaceful and calm a picture of nature at its best.

    • Mackenz

      Thank you soren

    • Tony36

      Beautiful

      • Mackenz

        Thank you Tony

        • Tony36

          You're welcome

        • Caring dove

          Nice words ))

          • Mackenz

            Thanks for commenting!

          • Caring dove

          • Mackenz

          • orchidee

            A fine write M.

          • rhmn_7

            Is that your horse that you are painting with your beautiful words?

            • Mackenz

              Yes

            • Doggerel Dave

              A horse rider? A skill you have for life. Andyour poem, simple and clear, shows the empathy that goes with it.

              • Mackenz

                Thank you

              • rrodriguez

                This is, indeed , a short story nicely written. The scene is marvelous and the horse graceful. This is a subject without end. Thank you for the poem.

                • Mackenz

                  Thank you



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