Making Green & Reflex

Neville

Making Green

 

 She wore a pretty yellow

   summer dress ..

He wore a pair of old blue

   torn jeans ..

When they came together

   come autumn ..

They then made, the most

   beautiful of greens ..

 

 

Reflex

 

Smelling of sunshine and apples,

for a moment,

I was blinded ..

And having had a little orgasm

in my nose,

I felt sure it was

the light about her made me sneeze ..

 

 

 

 

 

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 17th, 2024 01:34
  • Comment from author about the poem: another 2 for the price of 1 .. the reflex referred to in the second scribble is called Autosomal Dominant Compelling Helio-Ophthalmic Outburst Syndrome or ACHOO for short .. bless you 🤍
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  • Users favorite of this poem: Accidental Poet
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  • orchidee

    Good writes N.
    I thought someone was sneezing when they said 'Haiku' - 'Ha-choo!'
    Do shut up Orchi, says Fido. lol.

    • Neville



      the old uns are the best .. I think I was the first to make that particular phonetic association but did not think to copywrite it ..

      • orchidee

        Aww, why they not laugh at my jokes? I do. Well, no one else may laugh at them besides me. lol.

      • Doggerel Dave

        Nah that's not right - them greens in chapter one weren't properly cleaned of seeds.....
        Having sorted that one for you, those two pictures are easy on the mind's eye.
        ACHOO (your comment) a collectable.
        Thanks Neville.

        • Neville



          Very kind of you Dave .. cheers .. Neville

        • sorenbarrett

          Well Neville creative, imaginative loved the blend of colors and the metaphor gos deep as does blue into yellow to make new green sprouts. You taught me something in your note I was unaware of the name of the reflex.

          • Neville



            my gut reaction is to thank you & BIGLY sb .. many thanks indeed .. Neville

          • MendedFences27

            Loved both of these. 'Making Green" I would say, would be my favorite. The simplicity of it adds to its message.
            "Reflex" is a bit humorous, not intended to be a morality poem, yet very enjoyable. Maybe you were allergic to her perfume. - Phil A.

            • Neville



              Thanks loads my friend .. Neville

            • rhmn_7

              Smelling of sunshine, now that's a beautiful expression!

              • Neville



                thank you .. I own the copywrite .. 🙂

              • Accidental Poet

                In reading your Author's Comment, I said to self, "Now that's a mouthful".
                😁👍

                • Neville



                  it is a mouthful .. bless you AP

                • Bella Shepard

                  Two stunning pieces, you've outdone yourself in brevity, wit and color blending. Made me smile bigly. Thank you!

                  • Neville



                    many thanks indeed Bella .. I am blushing bigly .. 💛



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