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Sometimes it never seems enough
No matter what you do
There’s always one more thing
That needs to be done
If you’re going to be the perfect one
A word missing
A smile that could make the difference
For your mother to love you
Then again look who we’re talking about
You
The one person in the universe
Who never understands the rules
No complaining there are too many of them
That’s no excuse
Others learn them
And make a success of their lives
Sometimes it’s never enough
All that’s left is to lie down
And hope for peace
Since everyone family and friends
Know what a loser you are
At the game called life
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juliette72 (
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Comments4
Harsh. No one should be called a loser.
A lesson here. Nicely written.
So relatable! Good write Juliette!
It always surprises me when someone likes my poems. They have always been a private thing for myself and I hesitated to share them with others. Thank you for liking my work
All in your point of view, a looser to one may be a superstar to another. Kurt Cobain was loved by his fans and created great music but seen as a looser in his own eyes took his life. Great write
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