So sorry my dear,
flesh weak but spirit willing-
all alone again
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Author:
JDB (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: August 20th, 2024 06:08
- Comment from author about the poem: Poking, pun intended, fun at myself.
- Category: Unclassified
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Comments7
Message received and understood. Short and to the point a great Haiku
Thank you.
Might be poking fun now, but there's tragedy lurking in those seventeen syllables.
A little ominous music now and then. Thanks.
Beautiful and so very deeply sad, a wonderful emotional senryu 🌹
Thank you.
I think I got it, and I'm chuckling, and now laughing. Good one!
I believe you got it. Thanks for the response. Glad you liked it. I think sometimes what is unsaid can often be more powerful that what is.
You are absolutely right my friend.
I understood this one. Awkward, but not uncommon. Best laugh it off.
If we can't laugh at ourselves, who can?
Story told and explained in the simplest terms. Nice.
Thank you for your kind words.
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