(These verses are fiercely dedicated to someone who has brought about profound change.)
My Jaguar
Oh my feline, with whom I reached the apex of desire,
An ocean of yearnings that could extinguish all the world’s fires.
Oh my jaguar with whom I reached the peak,
An ocean of dreams that makes the world’s fires grow weak.
Savoring a single moment, like a soul at its final stage,
You’re mine, and I’m yours—no matter what.
We love fiercely, shockingly, despite the odds.
Together, powerful, we stand, defying all the gods.
Remember, nothing is eternal; everything can be lost at any time and fall.
My lovely, I pierced your heart and now it’s my shelter.
In your savage embrace, I found my guiding star.
Like a rumble in the jungle,
I love you wildly, my fierce Jaguar.
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By Young Fella
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Author:
MRF (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: This poem is about a deep and passionate love. The speaker describes their connection as powerful, comparing it to reaching the highest point of desire and finding safety in their partner’s heart. Despite knowing that nothing lasts forever, their love is fierce and strong, like a wild jaguar. The poem highlights the intensity of their bond and the importance of cherishing each moment together.
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The metaphor is a good one and in reality the literal jaguar is a beautiful cat that I hope will not disappear for a good long time. Nicely written
Thank you for the insightful review. You are absolutely right, beyond the personification, this portrayal of the jaguar serves as a reminder of its significance and the need for its preservation. Both the real jaguar and the jaguar as personified in my work play a crucial role in the biodiversity of our world, making their protection all the more important.
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