why

rengoku


Notice of absence from rengoku
if I’m off I’m probably punching my bed in anger

i don't want you to give it all up

and leave your own life collecting dust

and i don't want you to feel sorry for me

you never gave us a chance to be,

and i don't need you to be by my side

and tell me that every things all right 

i just wanted you to tell me truth 

you know i'd do that for you 

so why are you running away!

so is it me,or is it you?

nothing that i can do 

to make you change your mind ??

is it enough to show you that i,

was willing to give and sacrifice,

or is it a waste of time?

  • Author: Gyiuu does cry (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 22nd, 2024 00:25
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 61
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  • sorenbarrett

    Dilema well expressed. Love is a complicated thing.

    • rengoku

      thank you for commenting !!!!!!!!!

    • falcon_mn

      Hi Zelda
      Great you write poetry!
      At age of 13 it is amazing.
      I started writing poetry when I was 19
      Newer give up!
      Keep on writing.
      It is also very important to read poetry.
      Reading poetry gives you new ideas.
      You will learn new words new ideas how to express your thoughts.
      Keep on writing!

      • rengoku

        thank you,falcon!

      • Neville


        I can see that you have a real talent for this poetry thing we all have such a liking for .. I seriously hope you keep it up and am glad I passed by this way today ..

        All Good Things, Neville

        • rengoku

          thank you,Neville!!

        • Kenzie

          Amazing poem Cayde 👍

        • rengoku

          ty mackenz



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