Success the portal has opened
New worlds
New realities to explore
Success the portal has opened
Enter here
Be thousands of miles or light-years
In a heartbeat
The scientific discovery of a lifetime
I made it work
The glory's all mine
Yet
I have only tested it on dummies
Not a live person
Everything went fine in those tests
So despite my co-workers advice
I will test this portal myself
The warning signs tell me not to go
But
I shall step through
Will I make it to the otherside
Or will this human body fail ending my life
Only one way to find out
Off I go
- Author: Tony36 ( Offline)
- Published: August 22nd, 2024 07:10
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 13
Comments5
A portal would probably be safer than teleportation if held stable. Portals would do away with a lot of the need for current supply chains.
Nice write.
Thank you
A very creative and imaginative write. I wonder if there will be a sequel?
Thank you
Take a chance you only live once. Good write
Thank you
POWERFUL
Thank you
Well I guess you
made it through!! π πΈπΎ
Or I wouldn't be
commenting on you!
Terrific read, thank you!!
Best regards βοΈ Thad
Thank you and you're welcome
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