and I watched
the light in her eyes
fade away
I blinked a tear
it fell on my screen
I just want her back
I could have helped
if only I'd noticed the light disappear
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Author:
NinjaGirl (
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Comments3
Another excellent write NinjaGirl! I'm a fan! You captured such raw emotions and guilt in such few words. A true gift!
Thank you!
A very nice write with good depth
The tear of regret, the sadness of never being able to go back. Beautifully crafted in this poem!
thank you!
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